Today James cam to teach us about good comments and more. He also gave us this Does and Don't thing where you have to write something that you do and write something that you don't do. My next step is to enhance my skills that I learnt today and try to write a more better comment on other peoples blogs.
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ReplyDeleteI think this is really good.James has also taught us this.
ReplyDeleteSomething you can work on is your spelling
Hi Brandon,
ReplyDeleteI really enjoyed this lesson with you and how you completed the learning independent work quickly and efficiently. Being a troll is not great and it's good to see how you have identified this. What sort of things do you think you could do to help friends you think might be trolling? To make this post more interactive, you could insert one of the youtube clips from the slides if you'd like.
Thanks for sharing your learning.
James
I mean the second comment
ReplyDeleteWow. that is good you know what to do!🤔 Next time re edit and make sure u check your spelling and work on it too
ReplyDeleteHi Brandon this is really good work you have done here. I like how you showed they amount of work you have done. Maybe you could work on your editing for next but you still did awesome work.
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